3.6.20
My story
Chapter 1 Meet the characters and where it takes place.
The setting: It takes place in a Scottish grassland. The grass growing over the rocks is like a roller coaster for little creatures. It is a lonely, open area. The green grass looks like pieces of thin green ribbon.
The animal is a majestic bull with the heart of an angel. He has shiny bronze coloured hair. He is a calm bull. He is a male bull. His horns are like tall lollipop sticks. He has very shaggy hair. At first sight he is a monster, but then a sweetheart.
Sophie is a little girl the age of three. She has curly blonde hair. She is wearing a nice outfit. That outfit is a white dress with rose vines on the front.She also has a white flowery hat and she is holding a purple umbrella with white polka dots. She is scareless, brave and encouraging. She is lost in a wood and needs to get home.
Chapter 2 Where all the action takes place.
Sophie was on a bush walk with her mum and dad. When she got lost chasing a frog. “She is all alone in a forest with no food and water!!! cried her mum save her!!! PLEASE!!!”
Sophie was fine out in the woods. Sorta lost but fine. Then she met the most surprising thing ever. She had met a huge lovely friendly bull. The bull knew the way out because he has lived here for many years. Then Sophie got on his back and they set off into the forest…
together.
Chapter 3 Working together helps
After a lot of walking and struggling they came across a little cottage. They walked closer and closer to the house when
The scariest shadow was crawling across the wall when…
A lovely old man called Grandpa Danny. Came out from behind…
A rock. And with him was…
His cat Missy. And on his cat's neck was…
a coller. But on his feet and nose was…
MUD!!!
Chapter 4 We are a team no matter what
“Hello there,” Sophie said still on the magnificent bull.
My name is Sophie. We are trying to get home. Can you help?
Grandpa Danny said “howdy y'all” “Me name Grandpa Danny”
“Where yall live'' In Scotland, said little Sophie. Well I ain’t have the daintiest idea where that is. But I can help you. You can stay in me hut till morning. After a long nights sleep, the brave couple set off again. Not long after they started walking they came across a low river. The bull can swim. After they got across the river they were in a huge pile of mud. EWW YUCK cried Sophie wiping all the mud off her face. Are we home yet asked Sophie confused. MOOOO mooed the bull. OK said Sophie. And a long while of walking they were finally home.
THE END
3.6.20
My story
Chapter 1 Meet the characters and where it takes place.
The setting: It takes place in a Scottish grassland. The grass growing over the rocks is like a roller coaster for little creatures. It is a lonely, open area. The green grass looks like pieces of thin green ribbon.
The animal is a majestic bull with the heart of an angel. He has shiny bronze coloured hair. He is a calm bull. He is a male bull. His horns are like tall lollipop sticks. He has very shaggy hair. At first sight he is a monster, but then a sweetheart.
Sophie is a little girl the age of three. She has curly blonde hair. She is wearing a nice outfit. That outfit is a white dress with rose vines on the front.She also has a white flowery hat and she is holding a purple umbrella with white polka dots. She is scareless, brave and encouraging. She is lost in a wood and needs to get home.
Chapter 2 Where all the action takes place.
Sophie was on a bush walk with her mum and dad. When she got lost chasing a frog. “She is all alone in a forest with no food and water!!! cried her mum save her!!! PLEASE!!!”
Sophie was fine out in the woods. Sorta lost but fine. Then she met the most surprising thing ever. She had met a huge lovely friendly bull. The bull knew the way out because he has lived here for many years. Then Sophie got on his back and they set off into the forest…
together.
Chapter 3 Working together helps
After a lot of walking and struggling they came across a little cottage. They walked closer and closer to the house when
The scariest shadow was crawling across the wall when…
A lovely old man called Grandpa Danny. Came out from behind…
A rock. And with him was…
His cat Missy. And on his cat's neck was…
a coller. But on his feet and nose was…
MUD!!!
Chapter 4 We are a team no matter what
“Hello there,” Sophie said still on the magnificent bull.
My name is Sophie. We are trying to get home. Can you help?
Grandpa Danny said “howdy y'all” “Me name Grandpa Danny”
“Where yall live'' In Scotland, said little Sophie. Well I ain’t have the daintiest idea where that is. But I can help you. You can stay in me hut till morning. After a long nights sleep, the brave couple set off again. Not long after they started walking they came across a low river. The bull can swim. After they got across the river they were in a huge pile of mud. EWW YUCK cried Sophie wiping all the mud off her face. Are we home yet asked Sophie confused. MOOOO mooed the bull. OK said Sophie. And a long while of walking they were finally home.
THE END
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